Main Point or Thesis of Essay Connections in literature and life

                               Bell word : Connections         

Paragraph 1 -- Opening

Hook : Have you ever notice that sometimes life operates in a circle

Comment on the hook : To Kill a Mockingbird is all about connecting

Comment on the hook : My life is also like this.

Thesis  (with bell word) Life often connects things so they make sense in the end

Paragraph 2

TS (Main Idea, Topic, or Thesis) TKAM is all about circles

2 Echo words to be used : Circles , Connecting   

SD Boo Radley’s build up

        CM : Was constantly mentioned

        CM : Talked about loneliness which went from there back to him

    SD : Football in the town

        CM : First sentence says Jem played football

        CM : In these chapters says he tried out for the team

    SD : Sibling connecting

        CM : Scout wants to be like Jem

        CM : Constant fighting always re-accurse

CS : This book it’s a lot about building on things

Paragraph 3

TS (Main Idea, Topic, or Thesis) The circles in my life

2 Echo words to be used circles     links   

   

SD : School

        CM : Math subjects come that we’ve learned before

        CM : Same faces everyday

    SD : At my house

        CM : Wake up and do my daily starter

        CM Never changes always ends up back were I started

    SD : Roller Slide

        CM: No matter how hard you try always end back at the bottom

        CM : Even if you make it you are going to do it again because it was fun

CS : Everything has a link in life you just have to find it

Paragraph 4

Hook (the same as paragraph 1, or different) As you can tell a lot of things are circles

Echo word (could be bell word) Connections

Comment on the hook : TKAM connecting the peices

Comment on the hook : the real world has connections

Re-statement, in slightly different words, of the thesis

:Life is like a puzzle. Everything connects.